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For your critiquing pleasure by ~Exocentric:iconExocentric:

Categories Manga/Anime > Digital Media > Drawings

©2006-2009 ~Exocentric
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Uhm...yeah. Coloring practice. I really wanted to finish something, but couldn't come up with anything so I ended up taking a little doodle, blowing it up and then linearting and stuff...it's not very good. I kinda slacked off on the shirt cuz I was in a hurry, so ignore that.

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=platinummyr Apr 1, 2006, 7:32:40 PM
Thats pretty good. the eyes and hair are pretty good, and the shirt doesn't look TOO bad.

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~rockprincess05 Apr 1, 2006, 7:38:24 PM
I THINK THE shirt looks fun and good. It has a good form even if it's not all "complete". Love her eyes and her hair *drools over your style* :drool:
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~Jynessa Apr 1, 2006, 7:46:14 PM
whoa aweosme!! I'm gunna have to meet oyu one day so you can show me how to draw like that lol. Your great at it. I cant draw faces well dunno how really.
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~rtil Apr 1, 2006, 8:03:18 PM
very nice use of color. i'm not a big fan of the eyes over the hair thing, freaks me out. but my only suggestion here is the chin is misaligned, it looks like her jaw is broken. otherwise good work. just need that moved to the left a bit.
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*XullraeZauviir Apr 1, 2006, 10:55:26 PM
Love the expression, so soft and unsure. :)

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~AnnabellaChronos Apr 1, 2006, 11:11:05 PM
It's pretty good as a coloring job. The only thing I see wrong is with her left cheek (from her point of view), should have a little more light on it, or at least the top of it. >.>

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~AnnabellaChronos Apr 1, 2006, 11:11:45 PM
Err, no...scratch that; hair. X3

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*ichigo-kiui-sasuke Apr 2, 2006, 12:00:32 AM
This is really pretty ^_^
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~faerwin Apr 2, 2006, 8:35:25 AM
i love the girls collar, and how u used really obvious shadows (i admire people who take chances and do dramatic things). the simple background is nice too. i love the eyes (they're so shiny-wonderful!)

however, the left cheek looks a little too bulgy. the shadow on her right cheek looks knda weird too; its like, the same color as the nose so it looks like it connect to the nose. O_o the chin looks like its jutting out too much and not aligned with the rest of the face, but that might just be me. great pic though!

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~SkeletalWings Apr 2, 2006, 6:19:46 PM
Oh Exo, she's gorgeous! I love the shading on this one a lot, and the shades you chose, nice and calm. I've fallen in love with her eyes, they're so pretty... I like how the whites of her eyes aren't bright white, and a bit more realistic. You've done a wonderful job with her hair too. I can't possibly critique this. :3 :+fav:

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I swore I'd never let her go!

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